Kaylie



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Matti: is always trying to get out of work and very lazy. she does things her mother tells her not to do. but then again she can be very caring for her mother and grandfather. she freaks out when she founds out that she has to move away to a different place because her mother doesn't want her getting the yellow fever. she gets upset when her mother doesn't want her in the same room as her. matti doesn't understand how much her mother cares about her

This story is based on the yellow fever and it becomes scary when Mattis mom gets the yellow fever. many people are dieing from the yellow fever and every time someone dies the church bells ring. and they are ringing a lot.

first paragraph: the character im doing which is matti the person who wrote the book the year it was published

body paragraph: the way the characters act in the beginning of the story. what events take place in the beginning of the story. what the characters are like in the beginning of the story

body paragraph 2: why she acted the way she did. the friendship she has. the ways shes changing.

conclusion: what the story is about

rough draft..... The book Fever 1973 was published in 2002 written by Laurie Halse Anderson. I will be doing the charter Matti or Matilda for my paper.

In the beginning of the book Matti is very rude as shown in this quote "I tried not to listen to her. I had not cleared the ear wax out of my ears all summer, hoping it would soften the sound of her voice. It had not worked "and likes to get her way out of helping with anything like work or just helping around the house.When Matti's mother starts to get very sick Matti started to mature because she knew that her mother had yellow fever. As Matti's mother starts to get even more ill Matti and grandpa try to lever the city but right as they got to the boarder of the city they aren't aloud to go because the gaurds think grandpa has the fever. As they started to head back they stopped at a hospital so that grandpa could get treated. when they left the hospital and got back to the coffee house mother had left and that night they got robbed and the robbers had killed grandpa.

Matti started to feel abonded she relized that she need to do something about it. Had gone to the orphanage to help and there she had found Eliza and had not felt so alone and she realized that being around people made her feel less abandoned and instead it made her feel comforted. After a few days matti went to live with eliza and her brother Josephe. Josephe's wife had passed away from having the yellow fever and knowing this Matti knew that yellow fever really was wrecking the entire city. After a few weeks of not hearing anything about or from mother she starts to ask if anyone had see or heard from her because Matti is starting to think that her mother is dead and the she will never see mother again. The thought of never seeing mother again really scared Matti. Eliza and Matti started to go to peoples houses everyday to check on the people in the city that had yellow fever because matti did want the whole city to live and not have to go through the pain of losing a family member. One day when Matti and Eliza went home they saw that Josephes kids were sick and that's when they knew that they had to do something about it. It scared Matti and and Eliza because they didn't want to loose a loved ones. hey took the two little boys to the coffee shop where matti and eliza took care of them and cured them from the fever. when Joseph came to see his little boys he gave me and Eliza the biggest hug and just said thanks for everything thst you have done. The city all gossiped about what had been happening and about all the loved ones that had passed away.

I seen such a big change in the way that Matti acted and looked at the world. she went from being a brat to wanting to help others get better. The story was about how matti cooks mom got yellow fever and so did the whole entire city. When her and grandpa try to leave the city they cant because the gaurdes say that grandpa has the fever. When they go home everything goes wrong. Matti has really changed from a snob to a bright young women.

final draft.......

The book Fever 1973 was published in 2002 written by Laurie Halse Anderson. I will be doing the charter Matti or Matilda for my paper.

In the beginning of the book Matti is very rude as shown in this quote "I tried not to listen to her. I had not cleared the ear wax out of my ears all summer, hoping it would soften the sound of her voice. It had not worked "and likes to get her way out of helping with anything like work or just helping around the house.When Matti's mother starts to get very sick Matti started to mature because she knew that her mother had yellow fever. As Matti's mother starts to get even more ill Matti and grandpa try to lever the city but right as they got to the boarder of the city they aren't aloud to go because the gaurds think grandpa has the fever. As they started to head back they stopped at a hospital so that grandpa could get treated. when they left the hospital and got back to the coffee house mother had left and that night they got robbed and the robbers had killed grandpa.

Matti started to feel abonded she relized that she need to do something about it. Had gone to the orphanage to help and there she had found Eliza and had not felt so alone and she realized that being around people made her feel less abandoned and instead it made her feel comforted. After a few days matti went to live with eliza and her brother Josephe. Josephe's wife had passed away from having the yellow fever and knowing this Matti knew that yellow fever really was wrecking the entire city. After a few weeks of not hearing anything about or from mother she starts to ask if anyone had see or heard from her because Matti is starting to think that her mother is dead and the she will never see mother again. The thought of never seeing mother again really scared Matti. Eliza and Matti started to go to peoples houses everyday to check on the people in the city that had yellow fever because matti did want the whole city to live and not have to go through the pain of losing a family member. One day when Matti and Eliza went home they saw that Josephes kids were sick and that's when they knew that they had to do something about it. It scared Matti and and Eliza because they didn't want to loose a loved ones. hey took the two little boys to the coffee shop where matti and eliza took care of them and cured them from the fever. when Joseph came to see his little boys he gave me and Eliza the biggest hug and just said thanks for everything thst you have done. The city all gossiped about what had been happening and about all the loved ones that had passed away.

I seen such a big change in the way that Matti acted and looked at the world. she went from being a brat to wanting to help others get better. The story was about how Matti cooks mom got yellow fever and so did the whole entire city. When her and grandpa try to leave the city they cant because the guards say that grandpa has the fever. When they go home everything goes wrong. Matti has really changed from a snob to a bright young women.

When Matii started to feel abandon I could relate to how she was feeling. I struggle with have thoughts of people abandoning me so I like how I could relate to this book.

Reader’s Worksheet: My Name : Sami Ng Date : December 19, 2013 1. Things I like about this writing: You have a very descriptive writing pattern. While reading your essay, I was not confused at all, because you were able to explain things clearly. 2. My favorite part is: When you explain why Grandpa could not cross the border. It uses some very good imagery. 3. Here are some positive suggestions I think might be helpful: Try checking spelling and small punctuation error, so that way your readers can view your piece more effectively. Otherwise, superb job, Kaylie! 4. Here’s a question or two I have about the writing: Not really about the writing, but did you like the book? Did it confuse you or bring up any emotions? 5. Here are my thoughts on your concerns/questions about your writing: 1. Great job! 2. I like turtles. 3.


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